DIGIPAK - Feedbacks from Teacher

3rd/10/14

Feedback on production blog

What went well:

• Evidence of reflection on 'Hit Me Baby' 
• The pop video timeline completed 

Even better if: 

• Complete auteur theory analysis 
• More work needed on 'Hit Me Baby' video (editing) 

24th/10/14

Feedback on music promo

What went well:

• The first 10-15 seconds of edit to the music looks very effective 

Even better if:

• Closeup of the artist and lipsync needs more cutting 
• The editing must match with the fast drum beats
• Must maintain pace of editing 1:40-1:48

Production blog feedback

What went well:

• Nikita has been wordy on her storyboard 
• Identifying locations 
• Has completed shot sheet
• Booked equipments with Mrs.Excell 

Even better if:

• Risk assessment needs to be completed 

My response:

I will get the risk assessment and the filming done during the half term so I get plenty of time to do my editing when I am back after the half term. 

11th/12/14

Feedback on Music promo work

What went well:

• Good initial shots - edited to the music 
• Lots of extra useable footage already 

Even better if:

• More performance footage and close ups 

16th/02/15

Advert

• Change the background and put something which relates to your genre 
• Leave space for digipak to put on

Front Cover 

• Peer assessment - Natalie and elisia adviced me to change the name size of the artist because it was bigger and bolder than the album title therefore to promote my album more I had to change the name size in order for the title to appear bigger and clear.

Tracks Page

• Add more about what else will go on the tracks cover e.g. Videos 

This feedback from my teacher and my classmates has been very helpful in terms of me to understand how to improve my digipak and make it look professional.

23rd/02/15

What went well:

• Front cover background matching with the genre 
• CD cover looks very nice and again matching with the genre 

Even better if:

• On the tracks page, add more details on your video showing its a digipak rather than just a CD
• Make the artist more closer on the front cover to establish his brand image
• Add the insert on lyric book to make it more authentic 

26th/02/15

What went well:

•  There's good use of text on the cover, much better than the previous version. Looks more like an album cover.
• Good to see that changes have been made from the previous oral feedback by adding the video details on the tracks pages to make it look more like digipak rather than just a CD. 
• Also good to see the insert imported on the lyric book cover to make it look more professional - the insert being light and see-through black effect adds more impact on it rather than it being completely black. 

Even better if:

• His image could be more bigger (close-up) to get more focus on the artist himself

This is a picture of my teachers feedback on my digipak to show as evidence.

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  The second picture is feedback on my blogger work and evaluation question 1. I have made the changes mentioned and improved my work.